Short comic i did for my friends fanzime Playbishonen no.007. This is second version i did. Due to time pressure, i wasn't able to tone the comic for the version in fanzine. Used mangastudio Debut 3.0 for tones.
Oh and the script was the editors idea, not mine ^_^;
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Riko-kun ------------------------------------------------- The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
Glad you like it. Everyone likes girl with camera ^____^
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Riko-kun ------------------------------------------------- The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
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Riko-kun ------------------------------------------------- The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
Bullshit, this one is great, just people who read it laugs so much that they can't push any keys ^.^ (so +fav; +watch)
Oh...and then you want advanced critique...wow, it doesn't happen very often...so that's for it:
At first I'd say that I'm not even half good drawer as you are (not even quarter), but, according to my humble opinion the right guy's ear is too much shifted back.
Second thing I've noticed is that you all your characters have pretty long necks (especially in the topmost and bottom cells). But I didn't find it wrong, just noticed after a long look. Maybe it's your style...
So, that's all, just wanna wish you to draw more things such good as his one ^.^
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obsah bez formy chutná jako výkačka s příchutí jarního lesa řekl klajd
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Riko-kun ------------------------------------------------- The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
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Riko-kun ------------------------------------------------- The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
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Riko-kun
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The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
the girl with camera
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tcheuk tcheuuuuk !
gallery [link]
job [link]
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Riko-kun
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The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
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"Bohemian Raphsody" Queen
"If you want peace, prepare for war"
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Riko-kun
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The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
Oh...and then you want advanced critique...wow, it doesn't happen very often...so that's for it:
At first I'd say that I'm not even half good drawer as you are (not even quarter), but, according to my humble opinion the right guy's ear is too much shifted back.
Second thing I've noticed is that you all your characters have pretty long necks (especially in the topmost and bottom cells). But I didn't find it wrong, just noticed after a long look. Maybe it's your style...
So, that's all, just wanna wish you to draw more things such good as his one ^.^
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obsah bez formy chutná jako výkačka s příchutí jarního lesa řekl klajd
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Riko-kun
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The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!
XD XD
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"Bohemian Raphsody" Queen
"If you want peace, prepare for war"
Glad you like it ^__^
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Riko-kun
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The ultimate photographers tool the Praktica....takes photographs and hurts people seriously if one gets into a difficult situation...still works after that too!!!